This image is of the rear of Build Number 4643 ‘Grit’, taken at AWM a couple of weeks ago. This vehicle was straight from the factory (Coventry Ordnance): no ‘field mods’ were done before it was exported to Australia in mid-1918 and has the fuel tank and rear plate armour and short exhaust pipe:

The modification must have been a production standard by the time 4643 was built in 1918.
Looking at Chris' suggestion that it was a field mod, Mike suggests that the mod could have both been incorporated in production for new build MkIVs from a certain date and modified in the field by the issue of a Mod Kit for tanks already in service. That would explain (1) the absence on the example quoted in Chris' post that is without the mod: a training tank already on issue hence it didn’t need to have it fitted and (2) the images he quotes in 1918 all having the mod/rear armour fitted: possibly a mix of new build and field-modified tanks. Only an analysis of build numbers with and without the rear armour would add weight to this discussion, unless a dated ‘change notice’ is located.
These are earlier photos taken in 1996 during conservation work, with Mike's captions:

General rear view, with the rear access hatch open. The Mark IV had the fuel tank in an armoured cover mounted low at the rear of the tank. The handle visible to the left of the open door is on the armoured cover that allows access to the fuel tank filling port.

The side doors located below the sponson on the right side, in the open position.


To facilitate access during conservation work, the left sponson was removed. The six-cylinder Daimler engine can be seen with the side covers partially removed. The three exhaust stacks leading to the exhaust pipe on the roof have large-diameter shrouds. Originally, the space between the exhaust and the outer shroud was packed with asbestos.
Mike has also sent some interior shots which I'm happy to post if anyone's interested. I'll post separately something on Mike's forthcoming book on early Australian Armour.
Now we just need a sponsor to get us to Canberrra to see Grit in the flesh.
Happy building
Stephen